The Button Which Almost Destroyed The World Chapter 1
The was between the magical and non-magical society, now known as the Magical-Normal War Two, had ended a year ago. After years of secrecy, the new head of this small town of
“Come on. Magic? You must be crazy. Is this another joke?”
He had a goal and he did not want anyone to pull him down. The magical society, with their arcane powers, detected his movements and planned their own counter-attack. Without delay, the two armies met and blood shed. Even the one the mages called ‘The Challenged Saviour’ did not manage to stop the battle. Many had died on both sides. Eventually, leaders of both societies had a meeting as soon as possible and came to an agreement. War ended on
The ‘Field of Powerism’ was what it was called after that very day. The motto was ‘the grass is redder on this side’. In addition, after 600 years of living in the shadows of ‘normal’ humans, the United Nations had added new rules and allowed the magical society walk among us.
That was the prologue. Now begins the story of a teenage boy.
He watched his parents die tragically.
It was no accident. It was on purpose. Apparently all those who were in the war were slain. All those who worked at the army, navy or air force were killed, one way or another. The retired general was the one who killed them.
Before the cruel General of the Army was executed for his stupidity and wickedness, he escaped from jail and killed them. He even killed their family if they were in their way.
His parents were doused with gasoline and rotted in the flames. The sprinklers came on but the water from them was replaced with gasoline too. The kid ran away as fast as he could. His shirt caught fire so he had to take it off. Soon, their mage neighbours came as soon as possible to help put out the fire. Sirens from ambulances, police vehicles and fire engines shrieked loudly from a distance. The mage’s magic was drained out of his body. Water from the fire hydrate was soon spraying on the fire of the roaring fire before it could spread. The only thing the kid got as a remembrance of his parents was a button of his father’s shirt.
Soon after every single retiree had been killed, he drove to Traylen’s Tower. Traylen’s Tower was the three-quarter completed building competing to be the tallest building in the world. He drove to that tower in a tank at
That was at least a year ago. It was his sixteenth birthday and it was not a happy one.
After his parents died, he was sent to an orphanage which after a day or two, he was adopted. He broke a record too for being the fastest orphan to be adopted. A rich family took him in. His foster parents were too busy for any children so they decided to visit an adoption centre. Even though he had rich foster parents, he was poor. His monthly allowance was barely enough for him to ease his hunger. So he had to work during the weekends to get extra cash.
He did not really have a big birthday party for his sweet sixteen. He did not get a present from his parents. His parents did not even remember it. He did not really care.
He got up from his huge bed and crossed his room.
His name is Dyert Xavier, also known as ‘Dirt’ for those who tease. His birthday is today, 9th September. He has interest includes ninja and fighting skills along with ability of a thief. His ambition is unknown to him as of yet but he is leaning towards the field of weaponry.
He glanced out of the window and stared at the garden in front of the tall walls. Outside of the estate was a man who was taking a stroll. This man was a stranger to this neighbourhood and judging by the way he was dressed, he didn’t look sophisticated. However, ever since Dyert moved in, he had been here. He may be a spy. There had been more of those since that incident. It could be that he is a stalker or just a friendly fellow who likes walking and admiring the wonderful houses.
He took a glimpse at his surroundings; a bed, a shelf, a wardrobe and a desk.
To be more descriptive, it was a four-poster bed with a canopy placed on the wall, in the centre, on top of a wooden-tiled floor. The carvings on the posts were beautifully patterned and wood must had been expensive. It was a waste; such a beautiful design for such an uncomfortable mattress. It was hard and bumpy. Bumpy doesn’t mean that there are those massage pads underneath the top quality mattresses. It creaked too if the bed was pressed in certain areas. The desk was placed on the opposite of the room. A huge brown desk with a five columned shelf filed with books placed next to it. And finally at the remaining wall, opposite of the door, on the left of the bed, was the wardrobe. That was all he had. He had no computer, hand phone, radio, music player of any sort, television, portable or non-portable consoles or anything form of entertainment. He did have a pool which he was not supposed to dip his filthy body in.
His daily exercise is included in his daily routine. The walk to the gate and back is equal to a short walk in the park. Apparently, his room was like a small chalet alienated from the rest of the buildings in the estate. The only connection between his room and the other buildings was a dirt path which was barely visible at the moment. The plus side living here was the fact that there were maids to do the chores and he did not have to do any.
It was a Sunday morning. He grabbed his favourite book, Wishworld, but he had no mood to read. He opened a small, expensive-looking, fabric casing which held the button inside. A Yalti brand black button to be exact. It was slightly scorched from the fact that it was being ripped from a man whose clothes were ablaze.
He suddenly recalled that there was magic in the event.
How he love magic. He wished that one day he would be able to cast magnificent spells similar to his ex-neighbours’. He had made friends with a mage who was three years younger than he was. Zalador Atavan was a half-troll, half-dragon mage. He held the nickname of pyrotechnist. Fire is his specialty and fireworks are what he does best. He is not advanced in his abilities yet but he is slowly working his way there.
He slid open the door and walked out of his room. He put on his shoes and followed the narrow dirt path. Around him was grassy land and his house was in the middle of it. He approached a double-storey bungalow house which was the guest rooms and crossed the hallway inside that building. He went out through the front door and walked the open-air eating area. His parents would usually have tea here under the shade as the slow breeze blew by. He hopped on the large rocks which were placed in the shallow koi-pond. There was a bridge but he preferred to other way. He walked into the main wing and passed everything inside until he was finally at the beautiful, huge main double door. He pulled it opened and walked outside. The door swung outwards and closed.
The sun was blazing outside. It was a sign. Either it was going to rain or it was going to rain rocks. The meteor shower is just as bad as acidic rain. It is just as painful as rocks showering down. They are not those flaming ones. They are more like hailstones except they do not melt.
He walked down the sloped wide concrete path which leads to the grand golden gates. On one of those gates, there was a smaller door which could be opened. He pressed the codes on the keypad of the digital lock and it automatically unlocked. He continued his walk outside his estate, in the neighbourhood of large mansions.
How he envied them. They all go to high-class schools with all their fancy gizmos. Dyert did not go to a fancy high-class school. For his parents, getting a list of school names, closing both eyes and randomly choosing one was the way to do it. Taswin High was the school he went to. It was not as big as most of the schools and it was rated most dangerous in the top-ten list of most dangerous places. That would include other places such as banks and shopping complexes. It was also known for its secret hiding places. It was once an educating institute for the magical society. It was also the school where “The Challenged Saviour” went to. His laptop was still left hidden to the teachers. Dyert was the lucky one who got his locker and managed to access the hidden camera in the school.
He hummed a tune as he strolled along the sidewalks. His mind wandered elsewhere as he wandered on the path. His eyes caught something and he turned his head, following the glowing flying object. His head turned back and jumped by the sight of a man standing right behind him. He looked familiar but the startling incident made him hesitate in his head.
“Um,” Dyert paused to construct a proper query, “Who are you?”
“I’m a chap taking a morning walk down this friendly neighbourhood,” he replied.
It came to Dyert. He was the person who was always walking pass his house. He was wearing a black shirt with a ragged coat and black pants. His hard was messy and his face was ragged.
“Do you live around here?” asked Dyert.
“Of course not. I only wish. What about you, young lad?”
“I live with my foster parents here.”
He pointed to the huge yellow wall on his right.
“So you are the new fellow around,” the stranger smiled with comprehension.
‘The’ new fellow, Dyert thought, have people been talking about me.
“I heard you had a rare button in your hand,” he added.
Dyert took a peek at his hands but he managed to realise.
“You mean the Yalti branded button?”
“Yes, that’s what I was referring to. Do you wish to sell it?” enquired the stranger, “I’ll offer a hundred dollars.”
“Um.”
“That sounds a little bit too low. How about three hundred?”
“Um, I don’t think I am going to sell it,” he replied.
“What if I offered you a thousand dollars?”
“No, thank you.”
As Dyert walked back home, the stranger yelled numbers and the numbers kept increasing. Soon, his voice decreased into nothingness.
Dyert dashed back into his house. It was the most sensible thing he did. He was luck too. By the time he got back to his room, the sky turned dark. Grey clouds began to roll in and three bolds of thunder struck. The thunder was no ordinary thunder. It did not fork. It went vertically straight towards the ground. That was the two signs already. Dyert waited patiently for the third. He stared into the sky through his window. There was a spark amidst the clouds. It faded away in the darkness. That was the last sign. It was raining meteors.
The rate of death had increased because of new phenomena. There was also a new subject in school called Meteorology, the study of natural phenomena. They were taught about every new and old disastrous and non-disastrous occurrence. The first lesson began meteor showers. To avoid it, carry an umbrella and shelter yourself from the direction the rocks are falling. Umbrellas are heavier these days since they were no longer made out of waterproof clothes. Nowadays, it has to be water, rock and other elements proof. The cause of this new phenomenon is because of the last spell that was cast as a finishing of Magical-Normal War Two. It is also due to the frequent use of constructing spells which had a side effect. Rocks evaporated into the clouds. When the side effects wear off, all the rockgas (a new word to the dictionary) will sublimate into, obviously, rocks and pour down upon the innocent people.
It was doing so. The only different, Dyert thought, between rain and meteor shower was the noise. The window would not break as there were more bullet-proof glasses produced. Of course, one with a fabulous house would buy what money could offer for protection of their sanctuary.
Dyert was about to grabbed the Wishworld book when he tripped. He tripped in such a way, by the time he realised he fell, the sliding door was open and his head was out of his shelter. He was on his front and on his shoes. It was too fast for him to figure out what happened. He placed his hands over the back of his head while small rocks plunged on his hands. Before he was further harmed, he pulled himself back into his room. He looked around with suspicion and fear. He was confused. He was standing beside the window which was adjacent to his table and somehow, he fell on the ground a few metres away from his location. He calmed himself down and continued what he was doing. He grabbed another book instead and read on the bed with his ears closed.
It was a book of events that happened between the magical and non-magical society. He flipped through the pages and found the one he wanted. It was the time, after many centuries, the magical events were numerous. They called it the “challenged” times. Apparently, a prophecy came saying something about a lad with a stick would save them all; The Challenged Saviour. He had defeated a vampire by the name of Cyrus in his first encounter with a mythical creature. By luck, he had survived. However the vampire was resurrected and he took revenged by killing the saviour’s love one.
Dyert flipped the pages once more to a page with the profiles of the character involved in these real life events. Apart from the Challenged Saviour, there were his friends, the One-Armed Bandit, Mysterious One, The Ghost, The Innovator, Unless Accidental Prone Kid, Djinn Powered, Soul-ed Werewolf, The Giant and many other more. Those are just nicknames given to them by the world. Real names are not given to protect their identities. Though, most of the people already know their real names. There were the villains too. There was Cyrus, One Who Must Not Be Named Because He Is So Damn Evil, The Mage Betrayer and other villains.
Dyert continued on flipping the pages and glanced at the pictures. Suddenly, he abruptly stopped. His sharp observation has spotted something odd on page 424. The paragraphs and sentences were purposely written in a way, it shaped a word. The word had six letters, ‘T’ in one of the middle, and it was on fire. Fire! Dyert panicked. He tossed the book on the floor and stomped on it. It became bigger. It was finally out but that particular page was in ashes. His foot was slightly burnt and the book was not damage considering how much times he had jumped on it.
It had been a strange morning for him. It was not something to be worry about though. When you live in a world with a combination of magic and technology, you can get weird things. One example is the Illusionist Trading Card Game. It was the latest trend. Dyert had those cards too. With his job, he spends twenty percent of it on cards.
Illusionist is no colourful cardboard. It has a chip inside which enables an illusion spell. The illusion of the character in the cards comes will stand out and fight each other. Furthermore, they can grew level, train and learn new abilities. It looks like those cartoons but this had been achieved in reality. It was cheap too. It was only ten dollars a booster of fifteen cards and thirty-five dollars for a deck of sixty cards.
Beep went the intercom. One of the five maids spoke, “Lunch time.”
He glanced at his digital watch. It was one in the afternoon and the meteor shower had stopped, leaving rocks scattered everywhere on the ground. He approached the dinning room and had his fish fillet. The day went on with nothing interesting. He slept after lunch until dinner, then he had his dinner, did his homework and sleep again. Something interesting might have happened but he was in another world.
His alarm clock buzzed him awake. It was five in the morning; only thirty minute to get ready. He did it in time too. After the thirty minute of changing, packing and eating, he was standing out of the majestic gates as he awaited the school bus to arrive.
The bus came a few minutes after he was outside. It stopped with a loud boomed and black smoke trailed out of the exhaust pipes. According to various rumours, it had exploded twice before. The yellow door cranked and slid open. He took his sit at his usual seat somewhere in the middle of the bus and sleep.
Dawn was orange with a hint of yellow these days. That colour was caused by new various gases such as Xalium Pentaoxide (Xm305). Trixan Xalium was the vain mage professor who discovered the new element and named it after her family name. It is categorised under noble gases. During the night, this gas would be less dense and rise into the air. When the dawn comes, light will cause this gas to sink. As light passes through the particles of the gas, the light will change colour to orange. Thus causing the sky to be orange and also the naked eye will see shades of orange on objects.
“Dyert,” a voice whispered into his unconsciousness.
“Wrm…” he mumbled back half-heartedly. He torpidly opened his eyes, only to find out that his closest friend was staring at him.
“Yes, how may I help you, Freddie?” he asked.
“It’s about the chemistry report. Have you done it?” Freddie enquired.
Freddie James was a thin boy who has spiked hair. His nose and ears were quite small compared to an average human. However, he was the tallest kid in class. He wore his favourite black t-shirt with black trousers. It had no embroidery on it at all. In the gloom, no one could see him. He was lazy too; abnormally lazy. Even though his notes were not completed or work not done, he had the ability to avoid punishment. Even the teachers said he was a good boy. Dyert would sarcastically cough at that statement in the face. On the other hand, Freddie had suffered his own penalty. He caught a dangerous illness before and almost died.
Three months after the agreement that the magical society could stay under daylight, there had been an outbreak. It was a plague more deadly than severe acute respiratory syndrome (also known as SARS). It killed more than the bird flu and salacine put together. It was called magicine (mae-ji-scene) and the symptoms for it is ability to cast magic. The disease was taken from the word magi which is another word for sorcerers. They had not found the source of this disease but they had found a cure. The non-magical society accused the magical society for this new illness and they were almost driven back into hiding. However, a great leader and the youngest too, Rambert, had came with a great idea and therefore they could stay. Some may say that casting magic is not a curse, it’s a blessing. Well, after a week, the victim will start losing himself and chaos break lose. Uncontrollable magic and masochism was the symptoms followed after that and death comes slow and painfully after a fortnight.
Freddie suffered that. He was test subject number 610 and the six hundred and nine test subjects before him had past away, either by the new drugs or masochism. He was luck number 610 as he got the first cure. Soon, the sickness had been able to be contained.
“There was a chemistry report?” Dyert questioned back.
“I think so. I don’t really know,” Freddie ignored that problem and went on to another topic, “How was your weekend?”
“Yesterday was weird. A stranger wanted to buy my button and my book caught fire.”
“Dyert, Dyert,” he said with disappointment, “Drugs will not do any good. And you have to stop your pyromaniac ways.”
“I’m not…”
Before Dyert could continue, the bus jerked and the passengers slammed forward. The students rushed out and the bus sped off, leaving them choking in the carbon monoxide.
They entered the gates and followed the path in the middle of the grassy area. In the middle of the path, there was a flagpole which they had to walk around. They continued forward and up a few steps. The swinging double door was to be pushed open and the first thing that could be seen was the two parallel rows of lockers placed beside the walls. They went to their own lockers and chatted. It was thirty more minutes to school and seven hours till school ends. The first lesson, after assembly, was Meteorology and they were going to learn about earthquake. Ironically, the earth began to shake at the very moment and it was no drill.
Dyert’s life had become more complicated than he ever expected. First he thought love and life was it all. It was more than that, now. His adventure started when he met a stranger and it does not look like it will end at all. If it does, it will not be a happy-ever-after ending.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------That was the end of chapter 1. The mistakes are not checked, I'll find time to do that. Comment if you can. Chapter 2 will be written and uploaded soon.
Disclaimer's Note: I have full permission from Skull P to use the title 'Wishworld' for a fictional book in my story. If you want to find out what Wishworld is, see the links on your left, click on Skull Pandamonium
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8 Comments:
now I had to read that in sessions. value for money I guess. I'm curious to see how you write that though. cause the spelling's perfect, except for a couple of places where you slip a word that sounds like but isnt right. I think your main grammar problem is that your tenses are messed up. too used to writing different things in present/first person and past/third person I guess.
about the story itself. its definitely got flavor, like jumping into another world rich with its own history and culture. I hope that the way science and nature are so different here will be deciding factors in problems/solution in the future.
one thing though. the button. I find it hard to believe that someone who wants it would just jump to a thousand dollars like snap. dyert didnt know its worth before except as an heirloom but he should definitely suspect something now.
longest. comment. ever.
Now that i've got some time and my internet is working, I'll give a proper comment. well like Jun Ian said tenses are a little mixed up but then this is like a parallel life kind of thing. ill has the comp functioning after like ten years or that you didnt take it back after you left and the cameras still havent been found and all still function.
Your story blends alot of different generes together but it feels a little strange on the intake because it blends too many elements or at least thats what i think. Also, you are a little vague with the character names. Especially in the first 3 paragraphs. Overall the storyline is above average and with a little polish could be pretty good. (hopefully this comment is longer than Jun Ian's)
If so HA EAT THAT JUN IAN if not then too bad
Dammit isn't as long as Jun Ian's you win this time XD
Rather interesting start, you've still got a tense problem. Work through that. And yes, I agree with the vagueness of the character names thing.
You have an interesting picture of a different world, painted quite well, apart from the tenses, like I mentioned afore. I have merely one problem.
Normally, an adopted child wouldn't be treated that badly. Unless the parents are sadists or something. Egads. I think the love there died a little too fast.
thanks. I know about my mistakes. I'll check it later. When i get hit by an inspiration, i just write without a worry.
I'm gonna do something bout the vague name. I added a phrase to a line which might help slightly. And Jason, the adoption thing will be further explained as you read on.
cool, a comment contest - which, being the apathetic person i am, i will stay out of. anyway, since i managed to finish it (in one session! eat that!)...yeah. the spelling and the grammar's really improved from the previous stories.
the challenged saviour, eh? interesting...
i was kind of confused about the dude who wanted to buy dyert's button. is he crazy, or what? 'cause if he wanted to buy the button so badly, it seemed a little strange that he'd just stand there, yelling prices, instead of following dyert or taking the button for him...
yeah, your tenses are a little screwy. then again, that was really only to be expected, bearing in mind how long the story is.
also, there's the whole genre thing - is it meant to be sci-fi, fantasy, or a mix of both? because first i was all, 'oh, cool, magic,' then there was all that science stuff. i can only blame it on your science-stream influence. curse you chemistry-learning bastards!
and on a side note...that zalador atavan kid? he's named after the fall out boy song, isn't he? nyahahah. at least you didn't spell it atalan like me. cool name.
zalador atavan was atavan, the giant (from book 1)'s son. i know the name atavan since form 2 form an online game.
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